User:Autonomous owl ch/Farrukh Beg/Inexperienced Egg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Autonomous owl ch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Autonomous owl ch/Farrukh Beg
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Farrukh Beg

Main response to draft:

 * Very strong lead; built off the existing introduction exceptionally well, and new additions give more complete overview of his life. Well done!
 * Like the usage of sub-sections to chronicle his life; very useful and well organized! Additionally, the list of illustrations attributed to him during these periods is very informative
 * I'm curious about the theory (or theories) of Beg's hiatus from the Mughal Court. What evidence have scholars used to show that he was in Bijapur during these years? Alternatively, is there still scholarship that says otherwise, and what is the basis of their argument?

Additional points:

 * Citation of quote, "unrivaled in the age" by Jahangir, in first sentence
 * Could "Style and Technique" be a separate section from "Biography"?
 * Copyedit: grammar, run-on sentence in first sentence

Overall, this is very well-written and researched!