User:AvOsero/Freshet/Mullerybrux Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, good additions, just double check that they are relevant to the sections that you put them in.

Article Body
Great job on this section! I think the information you added here is great. examples are always helpful. Just a quick thing, adding links for benthic-estuarine or Goby Pomatoschistusssp might be helpful.

Biogeochemical Effects
The second paragraph you added is good but I think it would be better suited for the article body after the example of the goby. I also think adding an explanation on what an artificial freshet is crucial if you are to add that portion though.

History
The section on the Ohashi River is well written, but i dont think it belongs in the history section. The rest of the examples in that section have specific events and dates associated with them but this is a yearly phenomenon, which is a great example but not necessarily history.