User:AvOsero/Freshet/Zfajri Peer Review

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Really great article. I really appreciate all the pictures so that the reader can get a deeper understanding of what you're talking about. I also like the use of all your in text citations, it makes it very easy to visit the websites instead of trying to figure out which reference pertains to which part in the paper. Really nice work!