User:Ava.burnhamm/History of communication by presidents of the United States/Cduffy40 Peer Review

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Ava Burnhamm
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This article effectively illustrates how advancements in technology, such as radio, television, the internet, and social media, have transformed how presidents communicate with the public. The inclusion of specific examples such as Franklin D. Roosevelt's "Fireside Chats" and John F. Kennedys televised debate with Richard Nixon, adds depth to the discussion. However, the article could benefit from further analysis or discussion on the implication of these communication changes on democracy, governance, and public perception of presidents. Additionally, the conclusion feels abrupt and could be expanded to provide a more reflective insight into the overall impact of these communication methods on presidential leadership and public engagement.

Thank you for this feedback. I agree with you that this article could benefit from a deeper analysis of the implication of this communication on the government.