User:Ava.burnhamm/History of communication by presidents of the United States/Elliewolsfeld Peer Review

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Ava Burnhamn
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Suggestion for article: Add more information to the Direct Address with some more background information on the event. Overall the article has good information, I would use expand more on the information being provided. For example, why is Barack Obama referred to as the first" social media president". Just small details that would give more insight to the reader.

I appreciate your feedback, thank you! I will expand more, I like the suggestion of discussing more about why Barack Obama is referred to as the first "social media president."