User:Ava.burnhamm/History of communication by presidents of the United States/Siribeck Peer Review

Thank you for your feedback on my article, I appreciate it. I very much agree with you about expanding on the white house website section. That could definitely be more up to date and include ways that the website has evolved over time.
 * In the social media section you could add something about how Twitter is no longer and introduce X and how Trump was banned from Twitter, but is now on X.
 * In the Email section you could add the permanence of emails and how if they're sent from government offices they are public records and find a source to back that up.
 * You could elaborate on how the White House website is used today since that section is short and doesn't have recent source information.

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