User:Ava.burnhamm/History of communication by presidents of the United States/Zayanmoses Peer Review

General info
User:Ava.burnhamm
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ava.burnhamm/History of communication by presidents of the United States - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):History of communication by presidents of the United States - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your plan is extensive and very well detailed. I like your thoughts and plans to include Roosevelt's fireside chats as that was a key point in his presidency and brings more depth to the overall article. As a whole I think your draft is great and am excited to see the finished product!