User:AvaArdito/Paleoshoreline/Slaro2025 Peer Review

General info
AvaArdito
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AvaArdito/Paleoshoreline
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Paleoshoreline

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, really nice job! Here are some questions/ comments:

Lead:

- In the first paragraph of the lead section, before you get into "paleoshorelines are driven by changes in sea level..." I would add a descriptive sentence before this, explaining how they are positioned in regard to current shorelines/ describe what they might look like.

- it was helpful for you to add in how they are formed in greater detail, nice job with that!

Tone and Balance:

- neutral content, no biases present

Organization:

- clear sections, and the content within each section relates to the heading

Content:

- I would add more to the "Scientific importance" section if you are able to, just so that all the sections look more full

- good work adding in a whole new section! I think that adds a lot to this article (Formation section)

- it might be cool to go into more detail on the point you made about Mars having paleoshorelines

Images/Media:

- I like that you kept the original animated visual from the original version but, it could be interesting to also add in any pictures of paleoshorelines in present day, just to give the reader a real idea of what they look like in real life

- also, for the current animated visual on the page, it could be helpful to add a caption explaining what is being shown

- good reliable sources, just need to clean up the reference section a bit