User:Avacadood22/The Intelligence of Dogs/$tudent22 Peer Review

First, I have to say I like how straightforward the article is. Very informative. I did not notice any grammar mistakes. Everything seemed neutral to me.

After reading the article here are a few suggestions I have:


 * I do agree with the areas that say "more detail needed" There needs to be a little bit more clarification for those ideas
 * The main question I had while reading the article was, "Why was this topic of research? Is there a story behind this?" in other words, why was the book written?
 * If you're looking for more information to add, maybe add examples of certain breed reputations with their level of intelligence

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