User:Avaellea/Supplemental Nutrition assistance program/Aksgpp3131 Peer Review

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Avaellea
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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The changes and edited made throughout the article provides a more relevant and updated content. In the section titled " poverty", it could be beneficial to include more information on how the specific changed affect the different demographics.

The tone of the content is neutral and discusses more facts and studies. The content is also informative and is backed up by reliable sources. Overall, the section is clearly written and effectively communicates the main idea discussing issues. The information is well-structured and is more clear after the changes made.