User:Avalonolava/User:KC.Ma14/Terry Boddie/Avalonolava Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KC.Ma14 - Terry Boddie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:KC.Ma14/Terry Boddie - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Does not exist.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, this is a great draft for Terry Boddie.

Lead

 * The introductory sentence is concise, and describes the artist well.

Content

 * The content appears to be up to date, especially as it draws from the artist's website directly.

Tone and Balance

 * The overall tone reads a little like a biography at times versus just a concise set of information. Ex. In Early Life" " Not much is documented on Terry Boddie's time on Nevis and after his emigration to the United States, but his home island would impact much of his work later on." I would add a specific example of how his work was impacted. This feels like an interpretation rather than a fact.
 * In the Career section, you do elaborate on a series that reflected on this time, so I think you could just take the sentence out of the Early Life section.
 * Overall, the content is very unbiased! Great work.

Sources and References

 * The links all work, and there are plenty of cross refences to other Wikipedia pages within.
 * The sources for the article come from reliable sources.
 * There are a good number of sources.

Organization

 * The content is well-written and well organized.
 * I would add an additional section just for the awards they have received.
 * I would add an addtional section on prominent works they've done. While you may be unable to attach an example of their work, I think it would be beneficial to know what notable works they have made.

Images and Media

 * If possible, add images or media related to the artist that are copyright compliant.

For New Articles Only

 * The article does have 2 reliable sources: the artist's official website and the Art in Embassies government site.
 * There are a good number of sources.
 * The article flow is good when compared to articles of similar topics; the layout is neat and organized.
 * The article links to many other Wikipedia articles.

Overall impressions

 * The article is a great start to an article for Terry Boddie. The author wrote a neutral article, and gave a lot of information on the artist's life. As previously listed, I would try to expand on the artist's notable works that they have created in the art world, as well as add further sub-sections dedicated to those works and awards Boddie has earned. With those added I think this article would be perfectly acceptable as a Wikipedia article.