User:AveC88/Alice Payne/Bibliography

You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.

Outline of proposed changes
Click on the edit button to draft your outline. The main editing will include restructuring of the article to include additional, new, and relevant information in accordance with the already existing information on the Wikipedia page. New information includes details about her life and career that are currently not included in the article. The already existing information and writing in the article will be kept as no errors or irrelevancy has been found. New information will be interwoven with the already existing information.

Information in the article will also be spread into more organized and readable paragraphs according to date, in order to avoid jumbled information.

Restructuring will also include a more finely edited subsection, such as "Early life and education" will be changed to "Personal Life and Education." This being that more information on her later life has been found which can be compiled into this subsection, also, the capitalization of "Life" and "Education" would make for a more grammatically correct title.

Overall, these changes and additions would make for a fuller and more readable Wikipedia page for Alice Payne, Canadian Geologist.