User:Avela057/Homininae/Amarq030 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Avela057


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Avela057/Homininae?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Beginning of draft gives clear information on which sections of the wiki would be edited and what parts would be edited of that section. All relevant information was added, and it allowed for a clearer picture on what is being explained. Source's links worked when clicked. Very well organized and easy to go through.

Lead
Lead has been updated to reflect new content, and is not to concise or overly detailed.

Content
I think its important that you are adding the cranial capacity of humans now, so that it can be compared to other sizes. I really like that you added fossils and by their location number. Important that Lovejoy's view on bipedalism is in this article. Citation is wrong but mentioned would be changed in final edit.

Tone and Balance
Content has great tone and balance. Great work.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

All new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information, and can not find better sources.

Organization
Content added is concise, clear, and easy to read.

~Allie