User:Avemary12/Gender equality in Rwanda/Doodmom17 Peer Review

General info
Avemary12
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Avemary12/Gender equality in Rwanda
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender equality in Rwanda

Evaluate the drafted changes
 Lead: 

There is no update on the Lead portion of this article, it jumps straight into the Resolution of 1325.

The original article does contain introductory sentence that describes the articles topic. The draft contains introductory sentences for the paragraphs that are being edited.

The original lead does describe the article.

 Content: 

The edits that have been made are relevant to the topic and the paragraphs that they are being added to.

The content is up to date, there are references from 10 to 15 years ago which is revenant compared to the other content dating to 1325.

There is content that is missing from the original article that is added by the edits made, it doesn't seem to be missing when reading the original article alone. However, with the edits there is more important information needed to completely understand the topic of the article.

This article doesn't touch on WIki's quite gap. However, it does touch on an historically underrepresented population and topic. Rwanda is a country that is not well known and not well disused as is the topic of inequality in this country.

 Tone and Balance: 

The content that is added is neutral and not biased. The content is neutral and presents all sides.

The content that is added is backed up by references as recent as 2023 and only date back to 2015.

 Sources and References 

The sources are accurately used for reference, specifically source 4 which was a reference from the first line of the reference.

The sources listed reflect the most up to date and relevant information that is available/

 Organization: 

The content is well organized and flows fairly well, there are a few grammatical errors that can be found when slowly re-reading the edits. For example, "Since 2010, Rwanda has created a new national action plan, which went into affect in 2018 for 2018-2022, " In this line it should be ...went into affect in 2018 and remained in affect until 2022 or ...went in affect from 2018-2022.

 Images and Media: 

There is no media added to this article.