User:AverageEccentric/Perpetrators, victims, and bystanders/Cognitura Peer Review

General info
AverageEccentric
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AverageEccentric/Perpetrators, victims, and bystanders - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Perpetrators, victims, and bystanders - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Wow, you really get to go all out with this article!

Lead

Your lead will be a great addition to what's already there. It does well to establish what will be further explained/discussed in the article.

Content

You provide well-balanced and relevant additions to the topic. The content you added is from your more current resources, which is great.

Clearly, this specific topic is underrepresented, as it only has an introduction, even though it is under the larger topic of genocide.

Tone and Balance

You have a consistent academic and unbiased tone and contribute evenly to your chosen sections.

Perhaps more information on "Perpetrators," just because those prerequisites take up a good bit of space.

Resources

As you mention, finding the right sources will be difficult in such a small assignment, but you seem to have found the right ones. Your draft already seems to do this, but in finalizing your bibliography, I'd recommend not using the earlier sources, i.e. those from the late '90s-early '00s, just to keep your information as current and reliable as possible.

You have a good range for your resources, and they seem

Images and Media

The images already in the article seem out of place with no context or section relating to them, so perhaps an addition or reorganization to fit them into better locations. They're well-captioned for not having sections, but could probably be more concise should sections or reorganization occur.

Both images are public domain.

Overall impressions

Your additions will add quality to the article and expand on much needed information. Your layout flows well and is easily read, and you break up the information into palatable sections/paragraphs. It definitely looks like you've done this before, your draft looks great.