User:Averagestudentt/Expressive therapies/JCSmith123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing the work of Averagestudentt


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Averagestudentt/Expressive_therapies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Expressive therapies

Evaluate the drafted changes
Over all the article is great. I find it quite fascinating and informative. I like all the different types of therapy that you researched. I like how structured and organized all the therapy entries were. I see no spelling or grammar errors. I like the picture that you used under drama therapy; it seemed so appropriate. The links all seem to work, except one external link that I could not get to load; it came up with a message that is blocked by a firewall. So, you should double check and see if there are any other links you used that may have a firewall. Of course, this could have been only on my end, but it is always good to double check your links. I like all the types of therapies that you included. If you want to make it even better, I would research if there are any other expressive therapies that could be in the experimental stage. There is an extra enter that does not need to be there under Drama Therapy after the “Main article: Drama therapy” section that is not on any of the sections before or after that one section. Other than those things which are rather nit-picky it is a really great article.