User:Averd7/Transmisogyny/Parkerclaudio Peer Review

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Averd7


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Hey, this is your peer reviewer. I noticed in the "Instances" part of the Wikipedia page in listed the U.S. and Ecuador. However, you also have a picture from Berlin but that is not mentioned or talked about in the page. Because I have no idea who the Leibig 34 squatters are. So far the article feels it gives a neutral opinion on the topic being discussed. It does place a lot of importance on Julia Serano and her book Whipping Girl. I think you should add the piece of information you have on the Ecuador section. And when you add it do not forget to add the references to where you found it and properly cite it within the page. Keep working on your article because you have a really good topic, you got this :).