User:AveryLong5/Obsessive–compulsive disorder/MorganH2024 Peer Review

General info
AveryLong5
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AveryLong5/Obsessive–compulsive disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Obsessive–compulsive disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
Agree with you that the article is written in a neutral tone/language. I think that your idea to investigate more into the history will add beneficial information to the "Cause" section within the original article. I might stick to the shorter subsections such as environment, brain structure and functioning, and drug induced OCD. I am especially interested in the drug induced OCD section because I did not realize that was a possible side effect to some narcotics. Another interesting section at the bottom of the page labeled "Research" might be beneficial to find more information on as well, maybe some good peer reviewed research articles from our academic database would be a great place to start your search. The edits that you have in your sandbox draft that are associated with the Lead in the original article will contribute to overall knowledge oof OCD.