User:AveryScott6/History of the Jews in Venice/DarcyDU Peer Review

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AveryScott6
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AveryScott6/History of the Jews in Venice - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):History of the Jews in Venice - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your Lead is great, all the sections you added and expanded on are perfect. Maybe if you could talk more on the library section if you feel there is more to be said on that. In your lead if you could touch on history because your additions are very centered on that. Perhaps a link to the Wiki article on the Doge of Venice in the first sentence of the second paragraph of Early History would be useful and for Habsburgs in the Post-Republic Era section. I am also not sure if you meant to write Hapsburg or Habsburg.