User:Averyyrose/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Brinicle

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I thought it was interesting but it's a short article and is likely missing some crucial information.

Evaluate the article
The leading paragraph is very well written and engaging with just the right amount of information. The content of the article is slightly redundant in parts as there seems to be a lot of repeating of the same information just to lengthen the article. I would like for there to be a section with further information about the impacts of these structures on their surrounding environments and if they have significant importance to their ecosystem. The tone is neutral and the sources and references are legitimate but there are few of them which is likely why there is such little information on this page. The writing is professional but could use some fine tuning to mitigate that redundancy. There is an incredibly helpful gif which was a very good touch to use as a visual assistant. From what I can tell from the talk page there has been very little editing done on this article in 10 years and therefore this could use an update.