User:Avrillarios/Health in Nicaragua/Areyes12 Peer Review

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Areyes12
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Avrillarios/Health in Nicaragua
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Health in Nicaragua

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like how the editor added a sentence in the beginning of the article stating that the health in Nicaragua is a complex problem that has many layers and factors. However, you may need to cite this sentence, stating it as a fact, or change it to a neutral tone.As we are learning more about health problems, it is important to state the current findings factors that contribute to the health problems in Nicaragua. I also like how the editor added current updates about the life expectancy and cited their source.

Overall I believe they added well the new topic sentences and ending sentence of the paragraph that ties back to the paragraph's statement.