User:Avrillarios/Healthcare in Nicaragua/AB.cal Peer Review

General info
Avrillarios
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Avrillarios/Healthcare in Nicaragua:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Healthcare in Nicaragua

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the additions are informative and seem to update the article with more marginalized viewpoints and recent developments! I would suggest keeping the tone neutral by eliminating diction such as "extremely" and "suffering". The final added sentence doesn't have a source and seems to be making a claim based on the information presented; since this is Wikipedia, I would suggest either removing the sentence or changing it to be a summary of a cited source. I would further suggest expanding on what the impact of these NGOs have been, both good and bad.