User:Avrillarios/Healthcare in Nicaragua/Areyes12 Peer Review

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Areyes12
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Avrillarios/Healthcare in Nicaragua
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 * Healthcare in Nicaragua:

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall I did like that you included more information about NGOs.

I wonder who is saying this, "These privatized modes of healthcare services are still extremely inaccessible to the rural communities in Nicaragua due to high costs, chronic understaffing, limited diagnostic and pharmacological capabilities, and the significant distances that often require days of travel to access such facilities." is the community saying this? This got me wondering if we can make this sentence more neutral.

Since you mentioned medical volunteerism in the healthcare of Nicaragua, I suggest explaining more about the limits, the pros, and cons of having international groups come help the community all the time. Or I wonder if you can specify how the community feels when there is medical volunteerism. Is there other methods to receive help within the community?