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Everything in the article described the different Theologies of Religion. The only thing that I would have improved in this article is concluding paragraph explaining the different religions and how the article all comes together. The claims in this article are neutral. The author only mentioned certain claims when it came to a religion because he was referencing a person. I was slightly distracted by the "Kittner's Four-Point Model", because I didn't really see the point of including it but ideally it goes with the topic of the article. Besides this, I believe the citations were fine and the links did work to get to the information that he or she collected. There was no biased references or citations that i found.

Sleep Paralysis https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sleep_paralysis In the article "Sleep Paralysis", the author discusses what sleep paralysis is and what it means in different cultures and also the signs and symptoms, prevention, and treatment options. The claims and the citations do match and it is written very open-mindly and doesn't present a any bias information or opinionated claims. It is written as more of a informational article to provide the reader with knowledge of sleep paralysis. However, there are a few edits I would make in this article.

After "Under normal conditions, medial and vestibular nuclei, cortical, thalamic, and cerebellar centers coordinate things such as head eye movement, and orientation in space." I will add, "Stress and anxiety may also be linked with a person's likelihood to experience sleep paralysis, review found."

In the medications section before, "Though no large trials have taken place which focus on the treatment of sleep paralysis, several drugs have promise in case studies.", I will add "Treatment of sleep paralysis is aimed at whatever causes it occur. People with psychiatric problems may suffer from sleep paralysis." I will also add after that, "In this case treatments for other psychological disorders can also aid helping the prevention of sleep paralysis. Disorders such as Narcolepsy, Bipolar disorder, and even sleep deprivation.

After, "For example, sleep paralysis is referred to as a Pandafeche attack in Italy." I will add "In turkey, sleep paralysis is known as karabasan and was thought to be the work of a malevolent known as a cin, or a jinn in wider Islamic mythology." , "In Fiji, on the other hand, the feeling is called kana tevoro and is often attributed to the spirit of a dead relative that has returned to take care of some unfinished business." , In Pakistan, sleep paralysis is believed to reflect an encounter with a Shaitan - a jinn or devil spirit sent to terrorize its victim, conjured by black magic and only banished by way of a an exorcism or a consecration of the homes of Imams."

(in other words I felt like the author should have went a little more further with the examples of culture significance of sleep paralysis.)

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