User:Awatson723/Parkinson's disease/CDLR50 Peer Review

General info
Awatson723
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Awatson723/Parkinson%27s_disease?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Parkinson's disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The edits that were made have helped to clarity the Signs and Symptoms section; however, I do not see any added references so I cannot comment on this. The exact listing of edits made was also helpful in navigating the changes to this article.

The rest of my review will be on the article itself.

LEAD

No changes were made to this section.

I felt the Lead was very well written with a steady pattern covering the definition, symptoms, results, causes, cures, and a bit of history.

CONTENT

Very informative and clearly written. I like that it divides the areas that it effects in the body into separate sections for easy reference.

Overall, I felt that this is a very thorough article, and unlike many of the others that I have reviewed, covered every aspect that may be of importance to the reader. I learned a lot and felt as though any questions I would have were answered.

The section on Society and Culture reflected current implications.

As for the references, there were a number of citations from current articles/studies further indicating the thoroughness of this article.

OVERALL

The content added could be improved by the editor by adding references and perhaps further expanding the clarification edits to other sections of the article.