User:Awatson723/Parkinson's disease/Deezytings Peer Review

General info
Awatson723
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Awatson723/Parkinson%27s_disease?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Parkinson's disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is very well organized. I was able to clearly see what changes were made by AWatson. The italics made some statements a bit hazy but overall this added detail made reviewing the article a breeze. There were no changes to the lead section. The content is very informative. The added descriptions of the change in movement and physicality of a person who has this disease increases the reader's understanding of it. There is no media and it is not needed because it would add no value to the topic. The references seem to be numbered and noted within the writing but are not listed at the end for me to asses.