User:Awesomeaxolotl/Pearl Sherrod/Samson1453 Peer Review

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Awesomeaxolotl
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is good, informative and concise.

The content appears to be written neutral.

There is only two cited sources it looks like, which might be a little light.

There is no image.

There are no linked pages yet.

I think that "Early Life", "Activism", and "Later Life", are sufficient categories in terms of organization.

The article seems pretty set. Probably some fine tuning is necessary though.

I would check Wikipedia's style guide, but I think it might be better to Spell out "Nation of Islam" instead of NOI.

The lead does not include a brief description of the articles main sections.