User:Awwillia/Katie Stack Morgan/Kjb77 Peer Review

General info
Awwillia
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Editing User:Awwillia/Katie Stack Morgan - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Editing User:Awwillia/Katie Stack Morgan - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft has potential to be expanded into something greater. One thing I noticed is that there's a lot of text that has no sources and seems like assumptions. For example, how do we KNOW that her degrees were helpful in her career. I also found the paragraphs to be a bit lengthy without much breaking up the line of conversation. I'm not a huge fan of the bullet points of achievements either, it feels copied and pasted. Overall though I believe this article portrays a neutral stance for Katie Stack Morgan and helps educate her audience that may be interested in her contributions to planetary sciences.