User:Awymer/Kickstarter/WizardOfFox Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Awymer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Awymer/Kickstarter


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kickstarter?action=edit

Evaluate the drafted changes
It's an interesting angle to look at the unionizing side of Kickstarter. I agree that the lead section might be thin, but it might rattle some stakeholder trees if you try to get too involved in updating that. I believe the revolutionary history of Kickstarter is worth exploring if you can find reference material that supports it ~ W. Fox