User:Axelman03/Heteroflexibility/TriMinhHuynh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Axelman03 (Alexander Bolejack)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Axelman03/Heteroflexibility?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Heteroflexibility

Evaluate the drafted changes
The researches have very interesting findings. Paragraphs are very informative. You can consider break down into subcategories so that readers can understand the main point in each paragraph. Neutral voice.

Suggestion: Methodology can be shortened. Elaborate discussions in each finding.