User:Axlra/Mount Willey/Babs subs Peer Review

General info
Axlra
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Axlra/Mount Willey
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mount Willey

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the lead as it appears a neutral stance that provides basic information about the founding and the naming of the mountain.

I think it's a little unnecessary for the following sections to be bolded. I also feel that connected trails was a little short in comparison to the more in depth explanation of the specific trails. Overall I think that the article is well written, concise to an extent with the lead, although a little detailed for the specific trail. Overall it is sourced well and the article remains neutral and informative, well done.