User:Axolotl61/Mental disorders and gender/RFW17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alannacronk, MK1925, Jk2040


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Axolotl61/Mental_disorders_and_gender?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mental disorders and gender

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you guys made some informative changes but I found a typo here '''women who were survivors of domestic violence were twice as likely to suffer depression as those were not. ''' There should be a "who" before there. I also think you should reference the name of the study you reference in the intimate partner violence section. I like how you guys made the article more brief and cut out entire sections and incorporated the main points into other paragraphs. In the original article, there was a lot of repetitive information and it was a bit disorganized. However, I still think you can keep (from the original article) or add in more about the causes of IPV.