User:Ayaa7/Neo-organ/Zachbergevin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ayaa7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ayaa7/Neo-organ?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Neo-organ

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a clear discussion of the background of organ transplantation and what makes the neo-organ an important contribution to the medical community, but I think that there could be a quicker introduction to what the neo-organ actually is. I think you end up describing what it is quite well in the first couple sentences of the article body, and that this could possibly be moved from the article body to the beginning of the introduction.

There is sufficient technical background on relevant concepts such as decellularization in the article body. Technical concepts are introduced well, described thoroughly, and then sourced with the proper peer-reviewed sources. There is a description of the current research that has been conducted as well as a brief discussion of the future work that has yet to be done. The neo-organ's successes up to this point such as the tracheal graft were discussed, while qualifying the criticisms it has drawn by still requiring the decellularized tracheal graft.

The only grammatical error I noticed was the misspelled researchers in the first line and last paragraph of the article body (researches), but other than that, there were minimal issues.

Claims were substantiated well with peer-reviewed references, and overall the article certainly meets Wikipedia's notability requirement. Linking related articles to the sub-topic may help this article become more discoverable.