User:Ayna27/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * E-Toll (Indonesia):
 * Article Evaluation:
 * This article's content is relevant to the topic and it seemed to be written neutrally. Each claim in this article do have a citation, however the article needs additional citations for verification. Verification meaning that people using the encyclopedia can check that the information comes from a reliable source.
 * Additionally, the article does not address Wikipedia's equity gaps, as it centers on a technological subject without discussing potential impacts on underrepresented groups. More comprehensive sourcing would enhance the article's credibility and thoroughness.:
 * Sources
 * https://www.bankmandiri.co.id/en/e-money
 * https://www.bca.co.id/en/Individu/produk/Uang-elektronik/FLAZZ
 * https://www.bankmandiri.co.id/en/e-money
 * https://www.bca.co.id/en/Individu/produk/Uang-elektronik/FLAZZ

Option 2

 * Singapore Ladies Masters:
 * Article Evaluation:
 * This article's content is relevant to the topic and it seemed to be written neutrally. Each claim in this article do have a citation. The article highlights the achievements of Singaporean golfers and contributes to the coverage of women's sports, a less represented area in media.
 * To make this article better, I want to update the misdated information that is in there. I want to add more reliable sources and photographs so that the readers know what the article is talking about. :
 * Sources
 * https://www.straitstimes.com/sport/amateur-shannon-tan-wins-inaugural-singapore-ladies-masters
 * https://www.thestar.com.my/aseanplus/aseanplus-news/2023/07/10/amateur-shannon-tan-sweeps-the-pros-and-makes-history-by-winning-inaugural-singapore-ladies-masters
 * https://www.rolexrankings.com/events/5344:
 * https://www.thestar.com.my/aseanplus/aseanplus-news/2023/07/10/amateur-shannon-tan-sweeps-the-pros-and-makes-history-by-winning-inaugural-singapore-ladies-masters
 * https://www.rolexrankings.com/events/5344:

Option 3

 * South-East Asian Tourism Organisation:
 * This article's content is relevant to the topic and it seemed to be written neutrally. This article requires clearer structuring, and updates to become a more thorough and engaging resource. By adding detailed information about the organization’s activities, achievements, and future plans would significantly enhance its quality and relevance.
 * To make this article better I will update the misdated information and put a more recent information in the article. I would also want to enhance the article with visuals like maps or images of tourism projects so that it would improve the article itself.:
 * Sources
 * https://viewtraveling.com/tropical-vacation-destinations-to-visit/
 * https://web.archive.org/web/20160313063134/http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2012/06/14/kl-among-top-five-cheapest-cities-visit.html
 * https://web.archive.org/web/20160313063134/http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2012/06/14/kl-among-top-five-cheapest-cities-visit.html

Option 4

Ministry of Agriculture and Forestry (Laos)

'''This article covers relevant content about the ministry's structure and departments, maintaining a neutral tone throughout. However, it lacks sufficient citations, relying heavily on primary sources, which raises concerns about the reliability and depth of the information provided. The article could be improved by incorporating secondary sources to provide additional context, thus enhancing its credibility. Additionally, although the article contributes to broadening Wikipedia's coverage by discussing a governmental body in Laos, it does not explicitly address equity gaps; including more information about the ministry's impact on local communities or its sustainability initiatives could help bridge this gap. I would also want to provide more visuals so that readers are more engage with the article.'''

Sources

Only primary sources found from this article.