User:Ayoung22/Single's Inferno/Khascall Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Ayoung22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ayoung22/Single's Inferno


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Single's Inferno

Lead
I see that you've expanded the lead quite a bit. Maybe it would make sense to instead make a new section, after the lead, called 'Premise' or 'Format'?

Content
You're making good progress adding content to the article, but there's more to do in order to bring it up a full quality class. Maybe you can find reviews of the show that discuss more details. Some articles on this topic will include sections on 'controversy', 'reception' (including viewers and critics), awards, and distribution (see Love Is Blind (TV series) for an example). I also notice that some articles about reality shows comment on whether couples actually got married and whether they're still together. Also, it seems to me that the name/structure of the show is still a little unclear from what's here. I see there is a mechanism around 'Inferno' and 'Paradise' but I don't know what that means. I get that it's a reference to Dante's Inferno but I don't understand the game based on what I read here. In the article on The Amazing Race for example, the mechanisms around the 'Pit Stop' 'Road Block' 'Yield' and so on help to explain how the game works. That kind of content would help a lot.

Tone and Balance
Overall the tone is ok; one place to be careful is when you are heading toward 'reviewing' the show -- to talk about what's unique and whether relationships are forming, look at what critics and commenters had to say rather than giving your view.

Sources and References
It's hard to find non-gossipy sources for reality TV. Make sure you check Factiva.

Organization
See suggestion about the lead and content; subsections for new areas of coverage will be helpful.

Images and Media
It's hard to add new images for a TV show (we will add back the poster of the show when we make your changes live). One possibility might be to have the images of the four hosts from their wikipedia bio page, pictured together in a single box (sort of like Amazing Race does with some team photos).

Overall impressions
In general this seems like a good start; keep going!