User:Ayrielmarie/Texas Folklore Society/Lindsey2478 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ayrielmarie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ayrielmarie/Texas Folklore Society
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Texas Folklore Society

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Right now you have a good topic sentence, but I think it might be a good idea to incorporate a separate lead section that summarizes your findings. Maybe that is for a later stage in the process when you have further explored your topic.

Content: I think you have included great content. Maybe as you add more and more content, you might start separating the content into sections on different ideas: history, mission, members, etc.

Tone: You have done a great job incorporating a neutral tone. All of the information seems factual and not based on any sort of opinion.

Sources: Right now you have one great primary source. I think it would be great to verify some of the information that you have included so far with a variety of sources as you continue to find more information.

Organization: I think more organization will come later as you figure out fully what you want to include, but I think at some point creating more sections makes sense.

Images: Including some sort of picture of the founding members or current members could be a great add to the page.

Impressions: I think you are doing a great job so far. You are a good writer and you are writing this page in a very professional manner.