User:Ayrielmarie/Texas Folklore Society/Valeriebarajas Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ayrielmarie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ayrielmarie/Texas Folklore Society


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Texas Folklore Society

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So far it looks like you have found some really good information considering there was so little to start with in the original page. I would say to maybe work on the organization a little bit. From what I've seen visiting so many other wikipedia pages there typically is a very small paragraph at the top roughly outlining what the topic is and the most important information you'd need to gather first. For example I would have what the Texas Folklore Society is, its founders, founding date, and any other quick necessary information. Then you can break it up into other subsections like the History of the Folklore Society, Significant members, Contributions or Publications maybe? I say this because right now it's just one long continuous paragraph so just to present the information easier and make it more clear you could split it into sections. I would also try to link wikipedia pages on the names of all the members you listed if they exist or cite a resource with more information about that person. Listing so many names that people probably won't recognize would spark curiosity or interest in learning more so you could make it easy to click and go to another link where they could find more about that person. The new content you added is relevant and clear. Everything you wrote is well-written, concise, and neutral and also backed by a source. The links on the page work. I don't know much about the Texas Folklore Society but I'm assuming that there has to be a connection to the Latinx community which is why you're doing this topic right? If you find information about that I think that would be good to include. People like me who don't know much about the topic and aren't in this class may not know the significance. Lastly you may have already been planning on doing this but the original page has a few sentences on the open membership of the Folklore Society I would keep that because I think it's important to note that anyone can become a member. Good Job!