User:Ayub Shahada/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1
Port of Gaza

Article Evaluation


 * This article is not written from a neutral point of view. Lack of information. There is more to tell about the port that is not written in the article. Gaza suffers from the strict siege by land, sea, and air. Needs more information about the extreme poorness of the population. The only airport available was destroyed by the Israeli occupation in Gaza. The port is only for fishermen to use / something also not mentioned. Areas in the port suffer from annual erosion also not mentioned. Needs updated and reliable sources of information.
 * Sources
 * Abualtayef, M., Ziara, H., Seif, A. K., & Masria, A. (2018). Possibility of Land Reclamation using Construction Waste in Gaza Strip. International Research Journal of Engineering and   Technology (IRJET), 5(07), 2197-2205.
 * Zarifa, H. K. A., & Sarraj, Y. R. (2017). Traffic Impact of Planned Gaza Seaport on Major Roads in Gaza Strip, Palestine. Journal of Engineering Research and Technology, 4(3).
 * El-Hallaq, M., & Odwan, M. (2018). Spatio-Temporal Analysis of Gaza Strip Shoreline Using GIS and Remote Sensing. Egyptian Journal for Engineering Sciences and Technology, 26(EIJEST, Vol. 26, 2018), 14-21.

Option 2

 * Cold and heat adaptations in humans
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has only some reliable sources some of the citations are from news articles. It needs more reliable sources. It's written neutrally. It needs more information such as a genetic response to the adaptation and how the brown adipose tissue is responsible for that. Also and most importantly how the phosphoproteome protein reacts to heat and cold change.
 * Sources
 * Sazzini, M., Schiavo, G., De Fanti, S., Martelli, P. L., Casadio, R., & Luiselli, D. (2014). Searching for signatures of cold adaptations in modern and archaic humans: hints from the brown adipose tissue genes. Heredity, 113(3), 259–267.
 * Kanshin, E., Kubiniok, P., Thattikota, Y., D’Amours, D., & Thibault, P. (2015). Phosphoproteome dynamics of Saccharomyces cerevisiae under heat shock and cold stress. Molecular Systems Biology, 11(6), 813. https://doi-org.uprcayey.idm.oclc.org/10.15252/msb.20156170 

Option 3

 * Non-renewable resource
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lack of citations. The article is not mentioning the different technologies that extract to produce energy with non-renewable resources. Also the difference in prices of each resource. Climate change and the abuse of these resources are some things that this article needs to improve. Parts of the article are not coherent and some grammatical errors.
 * Sources
 * Stuermer, M., & Schwerhoff, G. (2015). Non-Renewable Resources, Extraction Technology, and Endogenous Growth. Working Papers Series (Federal Reserve Bank of Dallas), 1506, 2–37.
 * Lee, J., List, J. A., & Strazicich, M. C. (2006). Non-renewable resource prices: Deterministic or stochastic trends?. Journal of Environmental Economics and Management, 51(3), 354-370.

Option 4

 * Temple of Artemis, Jerash
 * Article Evaluation
 * There is no citation at all. Its talking using evidence and facts with no reliable sources cited. No coherence in the writing. Lack of important historical information such as construction, materials used, or time. There is no information about the actual status of the temple.
 * Sources
 * Baltsavias, E., Remondino, F., Weckerle, R., Ohlmann, J., Al-Hanbali, N., Al Bayari, O., ... & Al Azizi, J. (2006). Image-based virtual reconstruction of complex architectures using sophisticated automated matching procedures–The Artemis temple in Jerash, Jordan. Inter. Archives of Photogrammetry, Remote Sensing and Spatial Information Sciences, 36(Part 5).
 * Yaseen, I. A. B., Al-Amoush, H., Al-Farajat, M., & Mayyas, A. (2013). Petrography and mineralogy of Roman mortars from buildings of the ancient city of Jerash, Jordan. Construction and building materials, 38, 465-471.
 * Yaseen, I. A. B., Al-Amoush, H., Al-Farajat, M., & Mayyas, A. (2013). Petrography and mineralogy of Roman mortars from buildings of the ancient city of Jerash, Jordan. Construction and building materials, 38, 465-471.