User:AzeiahMacapagal/Native Hawaiians/Daytonaklink Peer Review

General info
AzeiahMacapagal
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AzeiahMacapagal/Native Hawaiians
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Native Hawaiians

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing the edits made to the existing article, I think you did a fantastic job! The passage that you added further explained content in the article. You added more context to a topic mentioned in the article, which I felt was needed. In addition, your passage included tons of evidence to back up your work and was written very well. Overall, good job!