User:AzlynPorter/Home economics/LandShark71 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing
 * Azlyn Porter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AzlynPorter/Home_economics?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Home economics

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is updated and concise and provides the user with enough info to have a general understanding of what they are going to be reading. the content added is relevant to the topic while also being presented in a neutral tone. There were no references listed in the draft which therefore makes it hard to gauge whether the information is from a new source or an old source. There were no links present or sources. The content is well-written and easily understood with no spelling or grammatical errors. There were no images in the edit. While the edits provided included no sources the information provided strengthened the article by discussing under-represented groups providing the reader with a different perspective.