User:AzlynPorter/Home economics/Welovebees Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gpeterson54, AzlynPorter, Rejoro323, Bwaller2x, Najohnson21, AttackWorm22, Trschwartz, KermitTheFrog13, Malevy14


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AzlynPorter/Home_economics?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Home economics

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is relevant to the topic and provides up-to-date, neutral information. They could provide more information about the equity gaps in home economics education and practices. Including these details could strengthen the article by providing more information about how access (or lack of) to home economics education impacted historically underrepresented groups. The content added is mostly very new, with a majority of their resources coming from 2023. The sources are thorough and reflect the literature available on this topic. The sources do not reflect a variety of authors and more can be included that are written by, or discuss historically marginalized groups. The content added is well-organized and well-written, it provides clear information that is relevant and leads to further understanding of the information presented. The article does provide images that enhance understanding of the topic. They are cited and adhere to wikipedia's copyright regulations. No images were added into the sandbox, so that is a potential point of improvement. Additionally, more content could be added about the people involved in making home economics a course of study. Adding people will provide more links to other pages that can be used to increase the amount of views this article gets. Adding people will also strengthen the article and make it more discoverable. Providing more references and sources will also strengthen the quality of the content added. The couple sentences added provided further clarification, but more can be said about the history and current status of home economics as a field of study at different education levels.