User:AzlynPorter/Home economics/Weloveflowers Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AzlynPorter


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 * User:AzlynPorter/Home economics


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Home economics

Evaluate the drafted changes
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After reviewing your sandbox and the criteria for the peer review itself, your draft is very well thought through! I believe the tone, balance, and content of your edits are very relevant to the overall knowledge of home economics. My suggestions that I have are ensuring that the body of your edits cater and answer your overall lead of the topic. I would also take a look at establishing your reference list. I can see various sources in the bibliography which seem to be fantastic resources, just make sure they are added to the reference list as well.