User:B.elizabeth.ah352/Laura (Giorgione)/Teniad Peer Review

General info
B.elizabeth
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:B.elizabeth.ah352/Laura (Giorgione)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Laura (Giorgione)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer Review of Laura painting

- The outline contains clear and concise ideas that are relevant to the article.

- I think the outline will ultimately elevate and improve the article.

- One thing I think could be omitted is the role of women in Venetian art, I think the role Laura plays in this particular work of art would be a more specific interpretation of that idea.

- Also, it might be helpful to look for sources you can add when editing the article. This can even give you more ideas as to what to add.