User:B06L1403/Urban climate shelters/Maireob Peer Review

General info
User:B06L1403. Westin Boyd
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:B06L1403/Urban climate shelters:Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The article is well written and gives a wide description of the topic. Introducing the definition of what an Urban Climate Shelter was in the beginning allows the reader to fully understand what the whole premise of their paper surrounds. They specifically related it to Barcelona and Spain. Integrated Citations are in place which allows for easy reference to the source where they derived their information from. Integrated the use of maps and images will further emphasis on their points and concluding their article with the upcoming development section that is blank right now will end the paper nicely.


 * well written
 * concise
 * need to add images
 * add last section
 * good citations
 * citations are relevant
 * correct placement
 * section headings