User:B12Braggart/Respiratory sounds/Bkarnkowska Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

B12Braggart


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Respiratory_sounds&diff=1029212952&oldid=1029212919
 * Link to the current version:
 * Respiratory sounds

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article has been greatly enriched throughout the course: the entire article is properly structured in terms of content and organization. The layout of the page is pleasing and easy to follow. Author offers appropriate citation for every claim and the sources are from credible, reputable journals, and book publishing companies. The author improved the article by presenting normal breath sounds and abnormal respiratory wheezes. Additional examples were added to the charts. The tone is neutral throughout the article and information is balanced. Good addition of history section!