User:BAGerken/Code-switching/MakennaA Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BAGerken


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:BAGerken/Code-switching
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Code-switching

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article overall looks great. I am not sure if you have added anything to the draft, so here are my critiques on the current article. There are a few minor things that need tweaking. For starters, the "Theories" section needs a bit more organization because I begin to get lost in it as we go down. It doesn't particularly seem like the whole thing is a "Theories" section, as it seems to go off topic a lot. I think it would be useful for reorganize this section and break it down into different subsections so it was so long and drawn out, likely to lose people in the words. It also seems you have a lot of examples that are unneeded. Maybe provide examples of different situations, not just different languages. The last critique I have for you is to maybe include why this is beneficial for people that don't know the language that well. For example, I know basic ASL, so the way a Deaf person communicates with me is different than they way they communicate with another Deaf person. It isn't necessarily switching back and forth between English and ASL, its switching back and forth between simple and complicated ASL. This is used so frequently in signed languages so I think it is an important aspect to address. Great work!