User:BCBulldog2023/Evaluate an Article

User:BCBulldog2023/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
2019–20 Los Angeles Lakers season

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because from the very moment I was a child and was aware and conscious to what basketball was the Los Angeles Lakers were always the team that stuck out to me and became my favorite team. This matters as the team is known to have an avid fan base and information of the team would be imperative especially for one of the most pivotal and important seasons in the teams history. My preliminary impression of the article is that it's detailed, concise, thought through to a certain extent but could use further details

Lead Section

 * The lead sentence clearly and concisely leads to some brief history for the teams dates. The lead remaining lead section goes into a certain amount of detail about what the topic is and what pertains to it but doesn't cover all the necessary information for a detailed overview

Content

 * The articles content is up to date and relevant to the topic

Tone and Balance

 * The article is neutral, but, I believe that the section on the Death of Kobe Bryant is underrepresented and doesn’t do a good job in valuing the importance of what it did to the team

Sources and References

 * The facts in the article are backed up by the sources provided, are thorough, current, and are all working.

Organization and Writing Quality

 * The article is well written, concise, and easy to read. No spelling or Grammatical errors, yes, it is well organized into sub-topics that adhere to the overall topic

Images and Media

 * There are no images whatsoever in the article and there could definitely be some which would help in understanding of the topic

Talk Page Discussion

 * No talk page

Overall Impressions

 * The articles status was a C meaning that it was substantial but still missing important content for the topic, the articles strengths is that it outlines the 2019-2020 season and ultimately what it led to in the championship but missed to make its mark but outlining all the small and relevant details which made that season as special as it was. This of course would make the article underdeveloped and truly with a few important pictures and filling in of the small details this article would go a long from where it's currently situated