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Article Evaluation: AA.20

This article appears to be largely on topic and provides a basic understanding of the subject and its capabilities. There is little in terms of distracting language.

The article could possibly use more visual aids on the subject but appears to have all of the written information which would be available.

The tone of the article is neutral and does not delve into any controversy. The viewpoint of the article is largely objective as it is talking about a weapon which appears to have never been used in combat rather than a more controversial subject.

Only one of the citations is to an internet source it is therefore hard to confirm if the sources are entirely unbiased but they appear to be largely neutral.

Nothing has been said on the talk page.

The Article is C-class.

As there is nothing on the talk page I cannot analyze any differences between our discussion in class about Wikipedia and how the subject is talked about.

End Article Evaluation of AA.20

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Theories of political behavior

I have already made two edits:


 * updating information about how many days an average student spends in class each year and how many hours each day a student might spend. I want to expand this with how many hours per year a student might spend but that information might require original research
 * I also added information about the differences in voting statistics between individuals who were in college during the 2016 Presidential Election compared to the average voting rate for 18-29 year olds.

I may be able to add to nearly every aspect of the article depending on the sources I can find. I currently see little that needs to be removed, so I would rather focus on improving and expanding onto what is already written, rather than focusing largely on adding entirely new information to the article, as that would require much more time. However, I can do that if the assignment requires it.