User:BKilkenny/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Organizational Communication

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because of the close relevance it has with the material my communication as praxis course has covered. My first impression of this article was that it had a lot of useful information about the way businesses communicate with one another as well as expanding on the intercommunication of organizations which helped better understand the usefulness of organization communication.

Content
I felt that the article's information was all relevant to what the topic was, but including the history towards the beginning of the article was a bit distracting and could have been moved to a later section in the article. The article did feel that it adequately addressed marginalized populations and included them in this topic, although it could possibly be added more if one felt to include it.

Tone
Overall I felt that the article remained neutral in their position and did not have any viewpoints that were over represented or underrepresented.

Talk Page Discussions
The discussions that are occurring behind the scene of this article are stating that it needs to be more neutral when it comes to scientific positivity while also needing more citing. The article is a part of WikiProjects and is rated as a level 5 vital article in society. We have only briefly discussed this topic in the current course, but has been talked about in previous communications courses in the past.