User:BLC340/Coral poaching/DonJohnson101 Peer Review

General info
BLC340
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:BLC340/Coral poaching
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Coral poaching

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article does a good job of looking at both environmental and political implications with coral reef degradation. The added sections from BLC340 also introduce some new environmental issues that are not yet being discussed on the page. As for potential changes it would be worth considering changing the section name “methods and reasons” to commercial applications or something similar. That seems to be mostly what that section discusses. Then the edit for that section by BLC340 could also be applied to the environmental impact category. Another suggestion I would make would be to find more information about the Kuna people if you are going to add it to the article. The one sentence about them might seem out of place if that's all there is. The sources and information all look like they are high quality and seem unbiased. Maybe some specific statistics about the issues could add to it. But overall these are all good changes to the article.